Giving an upvote for balance.

So I like it. It just feels like the beginning of a song. I felt like I was waiting for it to ramp up into something more and then it didn't. I do like it tho, just not a lot. I'm posting this criticism because you seemed open to it in another comment. And good on you for it

Don't talk about Radiohead like that

Nostalgia.

I can hear certain songs that will take me right back to specific moments, even if some of them are totally mundane.

I hear Tears for Fears - Everybody Wants to Rule the World and suddenly I’m transported back to riding in the back seat of my mom’s station wagon with my legs sticking to the red vinyl seats on the way to the swimming pool on summer break.

I listened, then upvoted to punish you for having me listen to that.

People like weird punishment goals. It's just part of human psychology.

I'm gonna agree with the comment above. I'll add that tweaking the mix just a little bit could give a better sound; you can always suck people in by making them feel a little surrounded by the melody. You already did something cool with making the bass feel like it echoes a bit, I think letting that high-pitch melody get one good echo in time with the beat with a bit of pan would go a long way. Again, that wouldn't be groundbreaking, it's been done before, but it does work to suck people in if you do it just right.

I'd invest in some moleskin.

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You got me, gunna listen rn and upvoted.

That feels like something Jack Stratton would do... Upvote

For me it can be either or neither. Music is transportive though, mental, physical and emotional.

Maybe a psilly analogy but it can be somewhat like a mini psychedelic trip. Music can take you places and sometimes it’s good to along for the ride and you might come out the other side with a new perspective…mental, physical or emotional.

The vocal production is your low point here. Guitar is groovy

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I got ya, buddy. Listened to your track and downvoted your thread. You're welcome!!

I downvoted to save you some walk time!

Obscured by the Clouds

It's not just a dream it's a nightmare.

Don't stop creating tho it's a great outlet if nothing else

Thank you, now convince the internet to do the same

Listened, it was nice. I can't critique the song,but I listed as I woke up and got my day going and it was a hypnotic chill vibe that I liked very much.

Do you listen to music you know you like, or do you just like the sounds?

Thanks for the insight and suggestions. I've come across this, too. I think there's a lot to be learned about why/how we connect to music.

Hit you with a downvote to ease your walking

Hah, if it works, it works!

I like the track, I get radiohead vibes