I don't think it is mechanically possible for it to be done at this point.

Yeh I was like unless they livestrwam could just be saying supposedly impactful thing

Maybe best to get off that LinkedIn Advice thing and vibe a bit more with the scene

Yeah to add to this, you repeat the same chord progression throughout the whole song. Like most modern music today. Production and everything else is solid. I like the laid back vibe and the silky guitars.

If I could suggest listening to some older music and hear how much they change progressions, key, tempo, bridges, pre-choruses, etc. Just to break up the monotomy of the song structure and keep the ear guessing. I've been learning a lot about this from Rick Beato's channel where he breaks down all music. He's helped me analyze my old music and how I can make it more sonically interesting. Keep it up!

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Fucking dumb

I up voted and didn't even listen to the track. Suffer in your jocks.

> 5 No clickbait titles or asking for votes

> Music should stand on its own. If you have an interesting story behind the music, you can add this in the comments or as self-post text.

Please accept the humble opinions of a fellow musician. The main hook of the song is kinda fire, got my attention right off the bat. The 2nd guitar was a bit boring tho. And the vocal didn't sound very confident? I guess? I don't really know how to put it. Your song vibe damn good, and I really wanted it to be a bit more tightly produced. Keep going pal, I would love to hear more songs in this vein in the future.

It felt like it was missing a chorus to me. Like it was all one long verse. The tone and style of the song reminded me of Smashing Pumpkins' Bullet with Butterfly Wings but never had that in your face transition that made it iconic. I was just waiting for that to happen through the whole song. Great sound, especially guitar. Best of luck.

i think it's still technically possible to go this far if you ran 1.2 marathons a day

Exactly, but OP could at least try to find a cover story that makes sense. It’s all just a bit obvious.

2 hours in, you're up to 26KM a day... You're going to die OP

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Nice track! I disagree with another commenter, though. I think you could lean even harder into that punchy, almost artificial/techno sound. It's a nice contrast with the string work. The little delay you got on the snare hits is HOT lol.

Also lame marketing attempt and makes me dislike this person, since I know they’re lying about walking. And even if they weren’t, why would I care about how much they walk?

Downvoted. Walk backwards.

I like the vibe of the song, enjoyed the vocals / guitars a lot personally but agree with some other comments around overly punchy drums and how it feels like it’s building to go somewhere / change pace but doesn’t quite get there. Fair play on putting yourself out there and being open to constructive criticism.

That’s a really interesting mash up!

There is a number of albums called Punk goes Pop that is the inverse of these. I was not aware Pop also went Punk. Neat.

I listened to it and upvoted.

Meh

Would you walk five hundred miles? Or even five hundred more?

To be honest, most of us don't expect you to actually do the thing promised either.

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> people just want to see me suffer

Walking is very good for general fitness. I just want you healthy, stranger 🏃

Also subtly hope you get orange pilled with all that walking.