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fieryxx t1_j1wkd8p wrote
Reply to comment by ZwhoWrites in [WP] You have the peculiar ability to pause time. Nothing can move, including yourself, meaning all you get is time to think. Today you find yourself paused with a bullet right in front of your eyes. by Votbear
I like this. My only question is if this actually happened or if he was just playing out the entire thing in his head. But seems you answered it? Maybe?
TenspeedGV t1_j1wiwvc wrote
Reply to comment by Mautos in [WP] You have the peculiar ability to pause time. Nothing can move, including yourself, meaning all you get is time to think. Today you find yourself paused with a bullet right in front of your eyes. by Votbear
Oh, I've definitely seen prompts of this nature before. This isn't an original by any means. It just isn't a repost that necessitates a removal under our rules.
SirS3NP41 t1_j1wiu1w wrote
Reply to comment by Mr_PizzaCat in [WP] Your new Girlfriend turns out to be the local Magical Girl/Hero. However, recently she seems to be "running out of power mid fight" more often and calls you an Office Worker to help her Escape/Settle the situation. You suspect she is just enjoying being saved for once... by Mr_PizzaCat
Thank you for the prompt, it was a pretty fun write
Mautos t1_j1winwf wrote
Reply to comment by TenspeedGV in [WP] You have the peculiar ability to pause time. Nothing can move, including yourself, meaning all you get is time to think. Today you find yourself paused with a bullet right in front of your eyes. by Votbear
I think I know which one he's talking about, something about a superpower that stops time until you find a solution to save yourself from peril with the same scenario. It's pretty similar but may just be a coincidence
UntakenNameFtw t1_j1wfb7f wrote
Reply to [WP] Your elf girlfriend is having a breakdown because it now just hit her that she will outlive you and your children. by SomeSortOfUser
I could still hear her pristine voice in the background of our room as I rolled out from the bed that seemed way to big. I shakily grabbed my cane and got ready for the day ahead as memories of her flooded my mind. Particularly that one day.
...
Her long ears were red and eyes dripping with tears as her silver blond hair laid messily around her as she cried in my arms.
"Why are you crying?" I tightened my loving embrace.
"I am an elf in love with a human. Why wouldn't I?" Her swollen blue elvish eyes looked into mine with love and sadness.
"I will out live you by more then a thousand —." Her voice cracked and couldn't finish the sentence.
I parted her hair Infront of her eyes and shaking shoulders while my other palm rested upon her heart.
I tried to comfort her.
"I will always be with you here...This is the start of a bloodline that you and I created. You will get to see your great grankids and great great great grankids. What's wrong with that? I probably won't be able to live long enough to see my great grandkids, but you—you could live long enough to see it through to the end. That's amazing. I wish I could see that with my own eyes. You might be sad to see me go but that's years and years away. Humans are all about the here and now. At least I am. So let's enjoy ourselves for how precious it is and please don't cry anymore?"
She cried even louder.
"You bastard. How could I fall in love with such a numbskull. Thanks for telling me that you're just the first of many that I will have to mourn!" She mumbled forlornly, her tears all dried up. Now she just looked angry as she put her head into the pillow to dry her tears.
I pinched her wet cheek to make her gem like eyes look back at me. Sunlight cut through the curtains. Her face basked in the warmth as her white skin glowed.
I'm an idiot. I wish I could understand. Wait, why can't I understand? What if she disappears one day? I would be heartbroken.
I looked at her sternly.
"Are you mourning me already when I'm right here in front of you? How cruel." I teased.
She smiled weakly.
"And how do you know that you will out live me?"
Her blue eyes widened.
"I fear the unknown. Elves might have an incredible lifespan but they are not immortal. I also fear what life would be like without you. You are not alone in this fear."
She laughed bitterly. "You're dreaming. Me? An elf wizard of the highest order—killed? They would have to send an army."
"Now there's my Claire Silverthorn I know and love." I kissed her on the forehead as she laughed harder before sighing.
"You have a point. I am not immortal. If I was to die you would obviously be just as sad as I will be when old age claims you. Doesn't really make me feel any better knowing that though." She kissed my lips and pouted.
"Thanks for trying to cheer me up."
I gave her a signature look making her look at me curiously.
"Love is terrifying huh?"
She shivered as she stretched in bed and pulled the covers over herself.
"Very."
"But it's also pretty amazing." I whispered in her ear and traced my finger down her back.
...
I looked at a huge oak tree. The leaves danced gracefully in the wind as the sun set in it's red glow. The thick oak wood glowed orange as the smell of fresh nature entered my senses.
I fell to my knees and stared for a moment at a smoothed part of the wood with mysterious elven glyphs and runes. I reached out and gently touched the name with my finger tips. The rune lit up as a subtle wind blew the old man's grey hair as something magical took place. All around the oak tree, a calm breeze blew the grass from the trunk outwards making all nearby trees dance. The firefly's scattered and lit the field with tiny green and red lights.
"Me and my big mouth." I laughed sadly.
"You told me you would outlive me a thousand years. You liar."
" A whole army you said...well you weren't far off..."
A few wet drops fell on the smooth stone on the ground beneath the enormous tree.
"Why did you have to go?" I said softly with unspeakable emotions. The flowers around the tree blossomed as if in answer.
"Dad?" A young man looking no older then 25 with longer than normal ears and blond hair came up and put his hand on my shoulder in worry. I hurriedly wiped my eyes and took a few deep breaths— trying to take back control.
A moment of silence passed with nothing but different birds singing in the background peacefully. The half elf knelt down and touched the rough bark of the tree as the rune glowed and gave life to the field nearby.
"Hi mom...Don't worry, I'm taking care of this old man here. He talks about you all the time you know? It's almost like I know you even if I never truly heard your voice...I'm also doing great if you're wondering. I have friends that think you're some kind of legend or something and I'm currently an expert in wind magik which I heard was thanks to you. I also know the sword thanks to dad. Also, there's this women Alice who won her way to my heart. I'm sure you would like her. Thanks for everything mom. I'll be sure to live up to your name...I wish I got to know you more." The long ear man shed a tear for a mom he has no memories of. I put my hand on his shoulder. As another wind gust from the rune caressed the field.
"Alright." I said softly, proud of the son I raised. I stood up and gazed at the memorizing sight of the elvish gravesite of my one and only wife. Still as beautiful as ever. Even after death.
I still got a few years in me. But what's a few years to an elf like you? You will be seeing me soon.
"Let's go son."
I turned and slowly made the trek back home with my son by my side.
"So any news on Alice yet? She pregnant yet? Where my grandkids? You got work to do boy." I gave him a devilish grin.
"Dad?!" The elvish man's ears turned red.
"I'm not talking about this with you." He said defiantly, arms crossed.
I burst out in laughter as the sun set in the horizon.
MechisX t1_j1wexu9 wrote
Reply to comment by turnaround0101 in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs
This may of been hell for me at one time but after over 50 years of living on this planet I almost understand humans and even like a few of them.
Still not what you would call a "social" being though.
ArbitraryChaos13 OP t1_j1wcjoa wrote
Reply to comment by Serpentking5 in [WP] "You are a villain who got beaten by a magical girl. You prepare for the worst when she bonks you on the head with her staff. "There! Now don't do bad things anymore!"" by ArbitraryChaos13
I like this. Mercy is not weakness. It is not the same as forgiveness, it is an opportunity to make up for it.
ArbitraryChaos13 OP t1_j1wc60l wrote
Reply to comment by Lord_Nivloc in [WP] "You are a villain who got beaten by a magical girl. You prepare for the worst when she bonks you on the head with her staff. "There! Now don't do bad things anymore!"" by ArbitraryChaos13
It's like... uh, Wreck-it-Ralph. He's a bad guy, but not a bad guy.
And yeah, I left it vague on purpose! It'd probably end up becoming either anti-hero, mentor... or just like the "one and only antagonist." Point it that betrayal isn't in the cards, as you sad.
It's the best type of villain! A threat, yes, but more than willing to fight with the heroes if they feel like there's a bigger threat or such. Or they just feel so inclined.
WritingGivesYouWings t1_j1wah7u wrote
Reply to comment by ZwhoWrites in [WP] You have the peculiar ability to pause time. Nothing can move, including yourself, meaning all you get is time to think. Today you find yourself paused with a bullet right in front of your eyes. by Votbear
I like how human and awkward it feels. Really brings the story to life. Gives it a lot of personality and originality. Great job! Keep up the good work!
disfreakinguy t1_j1wa0va wrote
Reply to comment by TheCaliforniaOp in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs
Unfortunately the parrot sanctuary near me closed this month. There's one the next state over, but that's too far. Thank you for being kind.
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TheCaliforniaOp t1_j1w6uub wrote
Reply to comment by newnotapi in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs
This may sound odd. But is there any chance volunteering at a parrot sanctuary or rescue might help? Because they are often lost between the life they knew and the next life they decide to choose and trust.
They saved me. It’s not easy with parrots. It’s patient, polite taming between two cautious species.
The wheelchair is the elephant in the room right now, and I apologize because I don’t mean that in a hurtful way. I mean it as “it’s apparently what everyone is getting caught up by.”
It won’t disappear. But it will shrink to its actual size.
I’ve not been in a wheelchair, but I’ve worn a fair amount of orthopedic leg gear.
The wheelchair will startle some of the parrots, if the chair comes up too close and fast to them. So the very thing that is the most agonizing is the thing one has to negotiate with the parrots about.
Once they get a chance to examine the chair and the human sitting in it, while feeling safe during this examination, this is what they’ll see:
“Finally a person who sits down and lets me come to them instead of just rushing over and jamming their hand under my toes, so suddenly I lose my balance! I could approach this person. Or they could approach me and just sit and talk, then listen to me.”
If a parrot is higher than you, don’t ever reach up unless you know for certain that bird wants to walk down your arm.
It’s better to let it come down and be at your level.
Or have it walk over and climb up to you.
But often there are caged parrots who can’t be let out because they’re too angry/traumatized, or they’ve been abused, or they’re disabled by broken body parts, and so they tend bite people, hard. Or they get bitten because they rush to another parrot for contact, so they have to be protected from themselves. They’re just so damn lonely.
And there’s not enough time for them. Too many parrots for too few people in the rescue/sanctuary.
For someone to sit even three feet away and then talk to them would be like a dream they never would dare expect to come true.
At the very least, it’s something different to do in a day. Just remember to keep your movements and voice calm, secure, not sudden, and it also helps not to stare at them.
Three-quarter face. Slow blinks. Humming. Whistling. Singing bits of song. Just holding a conversation about whatever comes to mind: “So, what do you think about the latest released information on UFOs?”
I didn’t mean to offend anyone. I hope this doesn’t come across as a r/thanksimcured toss-off. It’s truly and sincerely meant, and I hope very much that if not this, you find something else that gives you some ease and happiness.
Good luck and best wishes, always ♥️🍀🎶🌠
eway44 t1_j1w6hn9 wrote
Reply to [PM] Give me a random book title or whatever words you mix into a title and I'll write a short summary for it. by Thainexylon
Good reason to have them
Th3MysticArcher t1_j1w4zq1 wrote
Reply to comment by AutoModerator in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs
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Im_The_Comic_Relief_ t1_j1w44hi wrote
Reply to comment by AutoModerator in [WP] You feel your powers flood back to you as the dampeners in your cell shut off. A man in a business suit steps into it and asks a simple question. by ankh3125
Is it really that time again Dr. Freeman?
ALuckyMushroom t1_j1w398y wrote
Reply to [PM] Give me a random book title or whatever words you mix into a title and I'll write a short summary for it. by Thainexylon
The blue penguin barista
disfreakinguy t1_j1w312h wrote
Reply to comment by newnotapi in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs
I'm fairly recently wheelchair bound. I'm also separating myself from a toxic group of friends quite successfully, I just thought a few of them would support me, I was wrong. I'm dealing with it, I'll get over it, it's just that the sting is very new still. I thought a few dudes still had my back. They did not. Oh well, the ones I've got left are doing their best. We'll get there, I'm not mad at them it's just tough when your buddies spend the whole time they're at
My wife and I talk a lot. It's getting better, she didn't even realize she was acting this way. We talk most nights about what we can do to fix it and it's getting better. She is just struggling, she's used to me being strong, healthy and active. Now I'm in pain all the time, cold all the time, and my body isn't working right. It's a big shift - we've been together 15 years so it's a change that will take getting used to. We'll get there, the kids... I can't blame them. We'll work on it.
My care team royally fucked up. This didn't have to happen, but it did. We are getting through it, but it's our first Xmas with me fucked up and it's HARD. Especially without my parents. Things are shit right now. They'll get better. I'm fueled by spite and I have plenty to be angry about, but I'm not giving up. Not for me. For my kids. I may not walk them down the the aisle, I may not stand up to dance, but I'm going to learn to dance in this fucking chair. I'm going to roll them down the aisle. I'm going to love them. Even if I hate what my personal situation is.
Thank you for being kind.
Mr_PizzaCat OP t1_j1w23s1 wrote
Reply to comment by TenNinetythree in [WP] - Each Fantasy Race sees themselves as Adventurers and Pioneers. But they each go in different directions, Humans long for the skies, Elves journey over the vast open surface, and Dwarves know in their hearts that the true mysteries lie deep below. Each faction thinks they are right. by Mr_PizzaCat
Not in the slightest I am not smart enough for that.
Low_Draft_1740 t1_j1w1kpm wrote
Reply to comment by StartInATavern in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs
I really like this one. Surprised it doesn't have more upvotes.
Fresh_Rabbit6067 t1_j1w1ce7 wrote
Reply to [PI] A vampire woman stands in front of you. "any last words before I feed on you, human?" she says. Instead of fear a filling of pity wells up inside you. "Do you miss the sunrise?" you reply. Fully expecting to die there you're surprised when she replies "yes" with a look of sadness on her face. by dr4gonbl4z3r
When does this get made into a movie?
newnotapi t1_j1w11lm wrote
Reply to comment by disfreakinguy in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs
I mean, I am sitting here in a wheelchair myself, and this is not how my life has gone. I have friends, some of whom are also disabled, and they do not do that to me. When I still worked in an office, my officemates would wheel me around really fast in the parking lot for fun, and we'd get in trouble for having races in the halls.
All this isn't to boast, it's to say that it's not the wheelchair that is doing this. This is a fixable problem. You may need new friends, you may need counseling with your wife, but there are people out there who will not treat you like that. Also, people may be responding more to how you feel about yourself than about the wheelchair.
I also had a period of time where I felt extremely depressed about my health and pain and the reasons for being in a wheelchair. I ended up in a psychiatric hospital, it was so bad. Therapy helps, forcing yourself to think differently about it and take different actions helps. Medications also can help. You owe it to yourself to try a different way.
ZeusKiller97 t1_j1w0v72 wrote
Reply to comment by AutoModerator in [WP] - Each Fantasy Race sees themselves as Adventurers and Pioneers. But they each go in different directions, Humans long for the skies, Elves journey over the vast open surface, and Dwarves know in their hearts that the true mysteries lie deep below. Each faction thinks they are right. by Mr_PizzaCat
I’m pretty sure that’s the plot of an Etrian Odyssey game, but they have different ideas on what’s up a giant tree. Also, there are beastfolk in the mix, cause why not?
Darkstalker9000 t1_j1wkdsp wrote
Reply to comment by AutoModerator in [WP] The human lifespan is the lowest in the galaxy. That alone is why they are the most dangerous. by SeaCaptainJack
How does that make sense?