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Gaelhelemar t1_j2dami7 wrote

I think vampires don’t leave behind infected wounds if they’re feeding off the same person. It defeats the purpose of feeding on their victim to begin with.

Of course, we have much bigger questions to ask, like how is an undead creature pregnant by a living being.

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apple_of_doom t1_j2d6b20 wrote

"For you see what they hadn't realized at the time was that we did not know our limits. We did not know how fragile humans truly were and unknowingly these admittedly less than bright humans gave us the oldest known way of teaching a child to hold back, roughousing. Thus after several knife based injuries we learned the most important skill of all. One that would remind us to hold back from seizing all power upon realizing we may be able to surpass humanity."

"Restraint."

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RespondBorn6248 t1_j2d40yp wrote

he changed the prince to princess at the end

murdered women and children then said the now "princess" was in the right because she wanted to scare the nobility, AFTER HE FUCKING SLIT HIS FATHERS THROAT TO TEST THE SHARPNESS OF THE SWORD

basically it was a forced villain was always good story, fucking shit

absolutely worst fucking story ive ever read on this sight.

also he fucking copy pasted half of the story to make it look longer.

fucking worst shit ive seen, I CANNOT EMPATHISE HOW MUCH I HATE THAT.

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