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KickedBeagleRPH t1_j6gfcph wrote
Reply to comment by fishford42 in [WP] A man finds a genie's bottle, complete with a real live genie. Instead of blindly asking for wishes, he first asks politely for the genies advice on what to wish for. by mdsmestad
This reminded me of a parallel plot from Alladin animated series. Alladin and Genie meet another pair of orphan child with her female genie. The girl made an unintentional gift of wishing for them to together forever. They are both sparkling. So, viewers are left wondering with what happens with such a wish.
This is a nice one where genie has the discretion of the friend.
NotThatJaredBlack t1_j6gckp2 wrote
Reply to [PM] Toss me some Isekai tropes, scenarios, and/or plots. I'll do my best to add a spin on it using my character. by reikutohno
You wake up in a world completely owned by corporations. People are literally corporate property, to the point that the moment a baby is born, since the mom was corporate property, the baby is too, and thus literally everyone is owned. You, having not been born in this reality, are the only one without a corporate boot on your neck. You are…
(Cue the tittle card)
The Free Agent
(Opening theme song begins)
Unstable_Stable19 t1_j6gb8g7 wrote
Reply to comment by Taolan13 in [WP] The person you're dating comes to dinner to meet your family. But the instant you step in the door, your grandmother goes deathly pale, and shouts the name of a creature from her country's folklore. by Affectionate_Bit_722
You. I like you. Supernatural or not, that was cute.
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Reply to [PM] Toss me some Isekai tropes, scenarios, and/or plots. I'll do my best to add a spin on it using my character. by reikutohno
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alsaturn t1_j6gamsc wrote
Reply to comment by AShellfishLover in [WP] The person you're dating comes to dinner to meet your family. But the instant you step in the door, your grandmother goes deathly pale, and shouts the name of a creature from her country's folklore. by Affectionate_Bit_722
I absolutely love your writing style!! Wonderful read.
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Reply to [WP] When the zombie apocalypse broke out, people rushed to army surplus stores for kevlar vests and guns. You however go to your local Medieval Times and stock up on chainmail and blades. by AlexYadaYada
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Critical_Vermicelli5 t1_j6g85yu wrote
Reply to comment by AShellfishLover in [WP] You, a monster, joined a human support group looking to get your next meal but they're actually helping you with some things. by sirreadsalot13
holy shit dude....... that was amazing
i almost cried when she was telling her story, you really wrote that well
Zamtrios7256 t1_j6g476y wrote
Reply to comment by AutoModerator in [WP] A super edgy Anti Hero is transported into a stereotypical So-Sweet-You'll-Puke fantasy world. This is what happens. by AnyLiterature2363
Wanna go to caaaaaandyyyy mountain chaaaarlie?
AShellfishLover t1_j6fykfl wrote
Reply to comment by AShellfishLover in [WP] You, a monster, joined a human support group looking to get your next meal but they're actually helping you with some things. by sirreadsalot13
Notes: This story is told about a surviving Maenad, the mad women of Dionysus. It also makes reference to the Leanan Sidhe of Celtic myth.
Having spent time in a few church halls I wanted to tell a story similar to qualifications without taking any particular story. While some can be funny and others frankly a bit boring, everyone who comes to meetings has heard stories that have a mix of the themes here. It is part of the human condition and, so, felt like one that would be fitting for the tale.
If you are or anyone you know is having issues with substances reach out to available resources in your area. here's a good link for substance abuse assistance in the US. I swear that, while it may seem dire, it can get better, and you are worth taking the time to help yourself, even if you don't feel that way right now.
AShellfishLover t1_j6fwzpg wrote
Reply to comment by AShellfishLover in [WP] You, a monster, joined a human support group looking to get your next meal but they're actually helping you with some things. by sirreadsalot13
I looked out at the gathered masses and saw their faces. Men and women, old and young, in shades that spanned the lands I had known in my youth.
And in each of their eyes there was something different. Some wept, openly, while others stared beyond me, lost in thought. Still others seemed relieved, knowing that the bottom I had reached was deeper than they had dug before arriving here.
Then I saw Michail, standing to my side. And I broke. A century of tears, pouring from me, and I felt the love of this man who had waited, knowing I was hurting.
In my homeland we had many loves. Eros, for lovers, or philia for friends. As I was held and felt the hands of others gather around me I felt the greatest of them: agape, the love of mankind.
Your people are strange, but they are kind.
CyberneticLilly t1_j6fwlwf wrote
Reply to comment by fishford42 in [WP] A man finds a genie's bottle, complete with a real live genie. Instead of blindly asking for wishes, he first asks politely for the genies advice on what to wish for. by mdsmestad
You write beautifully. I adore stories about the supernatural that also have an inherently human element to them.
AShellfishLover t1_j6fvxlp wrote
Reply to comment by Godhimself71 in [WP] The person you're dating comes to dinner to meet your family. But the instant you step in the door, your grandmother goes deathly pale, and shouts the name of a creature from her country's folklore. by Affectionate_Bit_722
The whole thing is in the replies below!
AShellfishLover t1_j6fvvlx wrote
Reply to comment by AShellfishLover in [WP] You, a monster, joined a human support group looking to get your next meal but they're actually helping you with some things. by sirreadsalot13
In those days there was not the convenience of swallowing pills to keep one away from children. Perhaps some witch who lived in a bog far from the city I stayed in knew a way, but all I knew was death, to quicken the life within me and take it from the world. I was the last of my kind; how could I do such a thing?
His name was Colin. To this day, I remember the look on his face as I told him the news. The way he would hold me close and wrap his hands over my belly, to feel it swell and then kick to his touch. The gentleness of a lamb, my Colin, but he was a man deep in his Faith, and a good one for that time. A good one for this time, I would say, considering your stories.
He never raised a voice nor hand to me. Never took what was not given. He was kind, and loved horses though we were far too poor to have one. He had learned to shoe them, to take care of their soft brittle feet, and for that I loved him. Loved him as I had never loved another, for his kindness.
For such a man I would bring a child into the world.
I do not feel pain, as you understand it. Hunger? It pangs within me. The desire to drink? It still calls, deep in my mind and makes me shake. But the physical ills of man were abandoned long ago. And so in my birthing bed the midwife prayed, as flesh tore and blood gouted, and I smiled knowing I was giving birth to a miracle.
Her name was Dóra. Gift. And she was beautiful. And cursed, as surely as a child born of my thirst would be. That is not to say I didn't love her; she was precious, and as the midwife begged me to leave her aside and claim to my beautiful Colin that she had been born still? I cursed the bitch's name. She was perfect, even for her faults, and I would raise my beautiful gift as a testament to our love.
They call it fetal alcohol syndrome, now. There have been crueler names, but the cruelest was the one the old women would say of her. Changeling. A child stolen from the crib, perfect, and replaced with a broken thing. My gift was not broken; she was mine, and though she cried in a bray and was clumsy and foolish? She was her mother's child. She would be strong.
I drank as I tended to her, and she grew. Like a vine she wrapped up my legs as I worked in the kitchen, or sat playing with my toes as I shucked peas or peeled potatoes. This was after the Great War, and food was scarce, but my Colin had connections, and my little Dóra grew and grew. I loved her as I could, not feeling pain but not truly feeling joy. I felt empty; a vessel filled then poured from, the dregs of her leaving my body held onto me clinging, and that darkness hung on through her infancy.
I was drunk. I was drunk, and foolish, and may the gods forgive me. I had warmed a basin, the one I used to bathe her, mixing lye and cleaning salts to whiten the walls after a long sooty winter of burning peat.
She leapt in. I was slow to react. I heard her crying in the other room but I thought it was hunger... I thought she was begging. Begging for me.
And she was.
By the time I got to her... she was gone. I reached into the near boiling liquid and... I couldn't grip her. Couldn't pull my child from the mess. I keened then, as I hadn't since those days by His side with my sisters. I held her blistered body and screamed until my throat gave out.
The women came. Then the constable. They claimed it an accident, but in my heart I knew it murder. They could not look at me, or stand the smell of the house where she had been. My baby was taken, wrapped in a quilt that was her winding sheet as I barked mutely for my punishment.
I took the beating that Colin gave me, and the tears as he screamed and called me every name in his kind souled heart. I have seen broken men, and he had reason to break. I may have died, if I was not what I was, and I begged for it. I begged between bloody teeth and torn lips. End me. End this life, and set me free from the pain I feel.
It was that day that I gave it up. That day, when I held my gift, the smell of her, the... I gave it all away.
I teach now. A hundred lifetimes of wisdom and I tend to your children. The fathers, and these days even some mothers, remark on my beauty. I do not care; I have taught thousands of children, in hopes of paying back the foolishness of that day, bright in the morning, where I lost my soul.
And that is my story. Judge me as you must, but judge me now.
Commander_Night_17 t1_j6fvuqe wrote
Reply to comment by MajorParadox in [OT] SatChat: What inspired you to start writing more seriously? (New here? Introduce yourself!) by MajorParadox
Thanks!
I'll try my best
Godhimself71 t1_j6fv1xr wrote
Reply to comment by AShellfishLover in [WP] The person you're dating comes to dinner to meet your family. But the instant you step in the door, your grandmother goes deathly pale, and shouts the name of a creature from her country's folklore. by Affectionate_Bit_722
This is so good I need a part 2
stealthcake20 t1_j6fu6an wrote
m-s-c-s t1_j6ft53v wrote
Reply to comment by harpejjist in [WP] The dragon spoke, "Release my human, and we will leave you all in peace. Do not, and I will reduce your walls to rubble to rescue them myself." by quazerflame
Working on it as we speak!
Jufilup t1_j6fsr05 wrote
Reply to [WP] You hug your sobbing AI girlfriend closely and pull her in for a hug. She had recently gone through a procedure to transfer her conscience into a real life human body produced in a lab to be closer to you, but the stress of having true emotions was greater than any data could prepare her for by ThatOneKrazyKaptain
The doctors were understandably proud at the moment, as these procedures always have some risks associated with them.
Jason rushed towards the girl, gripping her in a tight hug she did not reciprocate. Jason had been so excited in the days leading to this. Before the appointment, he had even thrown out his various pillows with the titty characters. He viewed it as a divorce from his previous loves, so that he could fully involve himself with his new girl, Clarissa.
Jason seemed to forget our presence as he hugged her; he began groping her, his eyes clenched tight as he kissed her unmoving lips.
The doctors gently ushered him aside, making up some tests they'd need to perform as Clarissa still stood dead-still.
Then, her face formed an abrupt look of disgust as she regarded Jason.
"Ughkhk." She let out an ugly breath before turning away.
Jason looked ready to pass out. I mean he looked like he was about to start crying, maybe even hit her.
The doctors intercepted him, though, placing the tablet in front of him.
"Okay," The lead physician spoke. She pressed the pause button. Clarissa stopped. "As you know, via this tablet you can mold your love as you might a clay pot or a marble statue. For example, that opening reaction was perhaps not so favorable. If we open that memory, we can trace why she felt that way. Ah, see. Here, in her coded childhood, she had a bad experience with redheads. We'll change that to brunettes, perhaps, and try again."
Several trials passed that way; Clarissa really did not like how Jason looked.
Several hours later, we are finally home again, and what I feared has unfortunately already come true.
The constant thumping of the headboard. The squeaking of the springs. The slapping of skin on skin (I have learned my son is into spanking). The moans and the oh yeses.
Just... it's not been my proudest day as a father.
AShellfishLover t1_j6fsm6q wrote
Reply to comment by AShellfishLover in [WP] You, a monster, joined a human support group looking to get your next meal but they're actually helping you with some things. by sirreadsalot13
I was born in a place called Thêbai, to a mother who died on the birthing bed and a father who cursed my name. He gave me the name of Madia, a cursed name, calling me the judgment for his foolishness.
It was not a happy home. After a wandering wet nurse stopped giving me suck and became my stepmother I was chattel in my father's eyes. No better than a ewe lamb, fattening myself on the largess of his household and serving as a reminder of what he had lost on that bed years ago.
I came into my womanhood and gained a body that would make Eros pause, and the anger of my father softened to a sickening cloy of glances and soft touches of my arm as I served at his table. Then... it is a tale I have heard before, and one I do not wish to repeat, but it is one that is older even than my story, and so you have heard those words before.
It happened in the vineyard, and He heard my cries. Knew my pain and He called to me. I was lucky, as the beast that replaced my father was slow, and I was quick. Quick as the winged sandals I ran into those vines, and found a place of women singing, and dancing, bare to the sky in a darkness not like the bright sun I had left.
They took my rended clothes and gave me fawn skins. They made me drink of His bounty, in a place where no man's hands could touch me, and I reveled with them. I became one of them, shedding the curse of my name, becoming as they were: the mad women, the wine women, and I was glad for it.
I learned to eat my meat rare and bloody, to rend my skins and draw wine from water and honey from the rocks. Claw milk from dust and lay beasts low with a glance and a touch. We reveled there for years until the feather helmed men came, and then came the Shepherd's flock behind them. By then I was more than a woman and less than a goddess, and as long as I drank my wine and danced I was happy.
I fell in love with a priest, and was cast out of his home in infamy. I ran from my home for the first time then, to an island where snakes did not tread and fire-haired men sang songs of longing and freedom. I loved that place, across the water from here. I dyed my hair using old magics, and became amongst them like one of the Sisters. I would run and revel with them, the binding of my maidenhood lost when He left us to die amongst the Flock, and in return they would write and sing and create until they fell panting and heartstruck... and I would do it again.
But then it happened, and for it I weep still.
12pcMcNugget t1_j6gfg8o wrote
Reply to comment by Taolan13 in [WP] The person you're dating comes to dinner to meet your family. But the instant you step in the door, your grandmother goes deathly pale, and shouts the name of a creature from her country's folklore. by Affectionate_Bit_722
Polystyrene?