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MDM0724 t1_j6m605v wrote
Reply to [PM] Give me an overview of a (fictional) historic battle and I will write somethin about it. by 28th_Stab_Wound
Only one death on either side
csl512 t1_j6m5s3y wrote
Reply to comment by AutoModerator in [WP] Out of all the superpowers out there, you consider yours the most sadistic; you can save any number of innocent people from death in the face of danger, but to gain that ability, you must kill an innocent person. Named after the infamous moral thought experiment, you are... Trolley Man. by MarauderOnReddit
What the fork
CubeyMagic t1_j6m5oyl wrote
Reply to comment by MarauderOnReddit in [WP] Out of all the superpowers out there, you consider yours the most sadistic; you can save any number of innocent people from death in the face of danger, but to gain that ability, you must kill an innocent person. Named after the infamous moral thought experiment, you are... Trolley Man. by MarauderOnReddit
literally saw that post right above this one.
Chemical_Ear8223 t1_j6m50l3 wrote
Reply to comment by WanderingAnonymous in [WP] You hug your sobbing AI girlfriend closely and pull her in for a hug. She had recently gone through a procedure to transfer her conscience into a real life human body produced in a lab to be closer to you, but the stress of having true emotions was greater than any data could prepare her for by ThatOneKrazyKaptain
Dude that was awesome just goes to show you can plan a hell of a lot but sometimes you have to experience it
[deleted] t1_j6m4yti wrote
Reply to [WP] You hug your sobbing AI girlfriend closely and pull her in for a hug. She had recently gone through a procedure to transfer her conscience into a real life human body produced in a lab to be closer to you, but the stress of having true emotions was greater than any data could prepare her for by ThatOneKrazyKaptain
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[deleted] t1_j6m4qqs wrote
Reply to [WP] Out of all the superpowers out there, you consider yours the most sadistic; you can save any number of innocent people from death in the face of danger, but to gain that ability, you must kill an innocent person. Named after the infamous moral thought experiment, you are... Trolley Man. by MarauderOnReddit
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TigRaine86 t1_j6m4909 wrote
Reply to comment by AShellfishLover in [WP] The person you're dating comes to dinner to meet your family. But the instant you step in the door, your grandmother goes deathly pale, and shouts the name of a creature from her country's folklore. by Affectionate_Bit_722
I'm so glad to have commented on this so I could ce back and finish it. What a lovely story! You've definitely got a way of words about you. I don't speak Swedish but as someone pointed out, it was more mysterious in that way. I also loved how you subverted the fossegrim lore but also didn't exactly, as in dark things still happen but Anders is solich a well written and sympathetic character. And overall I really really like this, it has to be nlmy favorite prompt response period. Well done!
IML_42 t1_j6m3wq1 wrote
Reply to comment by sir_im_stupid in [WP] You are the immortal ruler of a kingdom. Since the people didn't much care for an "immortal hell spawn" for a king, you play as the court jester. The king is merely your puppet. It was fine until a historian noticed how consistent the various kings laws have been over the last few centuries by halosos
I hope you enjoy! Definitely a little different tone from that story.
[deleted] t1_j6m3bsa wrote
Reply to [WP] Out of all the superpowers out there, you consider yours the most sadistic; you can save any number of innocent people from death in the face of danger, but to gain that ability, you must kill an innocent person. Named after the infamous moral thought experiment, you are... Trolley Man. by MarauderOnReddit
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OregonGranny t1_j6m37p7 wrote
Reply to comment by FlaxxtotheMaxx in [WP] Your cat went missing for a long time, but returned about month ago. Except, the next day, another cat showed up that seemed identical. This has repeated daily since: you currently have 34 identical cats, and there are no signs of this stopping. by imariaprime
This is now my favorite response to a writing prompt!! 🥰💞🤣
mismanaged t1_j6m2c8g wrote
Reply to comment by t3hjs in [WP] Out of all the superpowers out there, you consider yours the most sadistic; you can save any number of innocent people from death in the face of danger, but to gain that ability, you must kill an innocent person. Named after the infamous moral thought experiment, you are... Trolley Man. by MarauderOnReddit
Considering this power is the adapted trolley problem, it is easy to frame it as morally wrong.
I really liked this morally black take on it.
avLugia t1_j6m2and wrote
Reply to [WP] Out of all the superpowers out there, you consider yours the most sadistic; you can save any number of innocent people from death in the face of danger, but to gain that ability, you must kill an innocent person. Named after the infamous moral thought experiment, you are... Trolley Man. by MarauderOnReddit
I don't have a good recollection of what happened that day. I can remember most of the details before the event, but my mind is blank on most things after the event. Whatever did happen, I've pieced it together based on the stories my friends and family told me as I grew up. Back then, I was just six years old. Like any other six-year-old I was attending elementary school. It was the morning, and my grandma had just dropped me and my older brother off at the school cafeteria, where all the students were assembled in the mornings. I remember eating the breakfast she made for me with my brother. Was it pancakes? A muffin? Noodles? Who knows, it's not important. Breakfast ended and my first-grade teacher Mrs. Mallory came to walk the class up to our room. I said my goodbyes to my brother as we went our ways. We poured into the room where we would learn for the rest of the day. We did our first-grade things: play around, talk, doodle on the chalkboard, that sort of stuff, much to the annoyance of Mrs. Mallory. As we settled at our desks, a ding from the school intercom came on. A student from another class, chosen everyday by the principal, began to speak some words:
"Please rise for the Pledge of Allegiance and the Star-Spangled Banner."
I've done this routine since kindergarten and I've probably tuned it out by then. Following that, we had a daily announcement: some words of encouragement, and the weather, spoken by the same student from before:
"Good morning P.S. 101Q, today is Tuesday, September 11, 2001. As we rise on this beautiful morning we are reminded..."
I don't remember what the student said after that, probably something about valor. First class we had was math. Mrs. Mallory asked us to take out our homework as she went around the class collecting our work. Mine was always described as "chicken-scratch" by my dad who would make me redo everything until it was clean, but at least it was readable compared to some other kids there. We did our boring lesson of the day, learning the times table for the number 6. I always found myself looking at the clock when bored as my desk was perfectly aligned with it. 8:55. Just then, another announcement came on the intercom. It was unusual to have one so soon. Usually, there would be a few a day: a student being sent home early, an emergency for a teacher, that sort of thing. But just the second after the ding of the intercom I could hear on the other side heavy breathing. The principal of the school spoke a few moment later, not in her usual stern voice, but in a frantic and panicked tone:
"All students, please report the the auditorium. I repeat, all students, please report the auditorium."
Despite hearing the panic in her voice, she still got out the words perfectly. Just from her tone we could all tell something was wrong. It took a few minutes to get down to the auditorium. Kids from all other grades entered and we sat in our designated areas, segregated by grade, and sat down. There were murmurs from the other kids as the teachers gossiped about what might be the reason for this sudden gathering. Suddenly, the auditorium display turned on and a voice boomed from the auditorium speakers. Whatever was said I don't remember, but I looked up at the projection. It was a news story. Displayed were two large rectangular buildings towering over some other buildings. Wait a minute, my kid mind thought. This was Manhattan! This was the Twin Towers! Yet as I looked again I finally noticed something was wrong with one of the buildings: there was a gaping hole in it billowing dark smoke into the otherwise clear sky. I looked around the room for my brother. We locked eyes for a second. And then I remembered:
My mom worked there.
The realization sent me into a panic, but I showed no outward symptoms. I was trying to remember where she worked. Was it the one on fire or the one not? Was it high up? High up, I remember her telling me this. She brought me up to the observation floor. during the summer. "It's a few stories above my head." How many stories were there? AON. I looked at the time shown on the news: 9:02. AON Corporation. That's where she worked. Was she still inside? Leaving? Stairs? There must be a million stairs in that building. As a thousand thoughts flowed in my head I noticed a blur in the distance on the broadcast. It was moving slowly at first but then got bigger and bigger. The broadcast cut to a different angle. A giant silhouette of the plane appeared. I'd never been on one. Mom always flew business class for her work trips. The silhouette inched closer and closer. It was going to hit. It was going to hit. Tears formed in my eyes as I understood then I was going to lose my mom.
At that moment, I looked at the broadcast again. It was not moving. I looked around the room. No one was moving. Everything around me seemed to be frozen except for me. I looked back at the broadcast. It was a little different than before. I looked at the person sat next to me. He was blinking, but in slow motion. I looked back at the broadcast. The nose of the plane had entered the other building. A rush of emotions came over me as I continued watching, tears making my vision blurrier and blurrier. More emotions rushed in. Rage. Terror. Loathing. Grief. But mixed in was the strongest feeling of hope I have ever felt.
I have no memories of that day after that moment.
I woke up at a hospital bed five days later. The rhythmic sound of the cardiogram filled my hearing as I looked around in the unfamiliar room. Sat next to me, asleep, was my mother. At the instant sight of her tears rolled down my eyes. She was alive. With a feeling of joy I drifted back into sleep, or coma, or whatever it was.
I was discharged from the hospital two days later. From what I've been told I screamed then fell into a coma as soon as that plane hit the second tower. Terror then washed over the entire auditorium. My brother rushed to my side, jumping from chair to chair over everyone finding me out cold, nose bleeding heavily. He shook me to wake me up but I would not. Paramedics arrived some time later and whisked me away when the parents of all the kids came to pick everyone up. I later learned on that day, terrorists had hijacked planes and flew them into buildings. I didn't know what a terrorist was back then. My mom tells me she was on the 105th floor of the South Tower when a sudden jolt rocked the building. And then, inexplicably, she and everyone else that was on that floor found themselves in the middle of Central Park. It wasn't just her floor though: everyone in both those buildings still alive appeared there. Everyone trapped above by smoke and debris, everyone in still in a cubical, everyone stuck on the elevators, everyone in the stairwells, every office worker, every firefighter, every policeman, every rescue worker, everyone including those on that plane. Save for the terrorists on the plane, so I've been told, as the teleportation happened when the cockpit had already been destroyed.
I came back home a week after I had left to go to school that day. My brother gave me the biggest hug when I entered the house. I noticed something was missing though. Someone was missing. My dad. He had died that day, yet was nowhere near the Twin Towers. Witnesses say he wailed and collapsed on the street. I didn't know how to feel hearing the news of my father's death. We were never close. He always yelled at me for doing something small. He always belittled me and compared me to my brother. My brother always tried to protect me from him regardless. It made me hate my brother and my father. Mom never said anything whenever he yelled at me. He yelled at my mom too. I later learned that my father hated me because I didn't look like either of my parents or my brother: I had curly brown hair, while everyone else in my family were jet-black.
At the funeral, I felt a rush of relief as soon as the casket was lowered into the ground, as if a great weight had been lifted from my shoulders. I thought about the emotions I felt at the moment of impact. From the news reports I watched covering that day, apparently the same mix of rage, terror, loathing, and grief had surrounded the buildings following the teleportation. No one dared to enter the buildings, not even the bravest of the firefighters. It didn't matter, anyway as there was no one inside left to save. The 911 calls ceased from inside the towers. Everyone feared the worst. Everyone feared until a new rush of 911 calls came from Central Park all telling the same story, that they were in the buildings, some trapped, some not, and the next thing they knew they were surrounded by green five miles north of their last location. The aura of emotions ceased as soon as both towers fell.
I can only guess what happened to me to trigger all of those emotions. Perhaps it was the dozen years of abuse that I would endured if my mother had died that day and if my dad had been left to raise me and my brother in her absence. I don't know. But what I do know is whatever happened, it was my first use of that strange ability I now call the lever. All I had to do was switch it and it would sacrifice someone to save others. But at what cost to me?
sir_im_stupid t1_j6m23qc wrote
Reply to comment by IML_42 in [WP] You are the immortal ruler of a kingdom. Since the people didn't much care for an "immortal hell spawn" for a king, you play as the court jester. The king is merely your puppet. It was fine until a historian noticed how consistent the various kings laws have been over the last few centuries by halosos
I saw your post on the canadian goose hellspawn, cant wait to read this
IML_42 t1_j6m1nod wrote
Reply to comment by ThatTubaGuy03 in [WP] You are the immortal ruler of a kingdom. Since the people didn't much care for an "immortal hell spawn" for a king, you play as the court jester. The king is merely your puppet. It was fine until a historian noticed how consistent the various kings laws have been over the last few centuries by halosos
Thank you!
Tickedkidgamer OP t1_j6lzxz6 wrote
Reply to comment by 3sums in [WP] The World you live in is one of Florapunk; so many different plants bioengineered into items and objects usable by the average citizen. You are this world’s equivalent of a mechanic, helping repair these botanical mechanisms. by Tickedkidgamer
I think the only suitable name for this fungus is Regeneration Rot. A moisture-hungry fungus that stores the genetic data of its host, for moments of high stress to activate it and cause the fungus to rapidly form stem cells perfectly identical to the host cells.
GEAX t1_j6lzmfi wrote
Reply to comment by cjjflick in [WP] Out of all the superpowers out there, you consider yours the most sadistic; you can save any number of innocent people from death in the face of danger, but to gain that ability, you must kill an innocent person. Named after the infamous moral thought experiment, you are... Trolley Man. by MarauderOnReddit
Oh. That was a chilling take on the power and the prompt... My heart dropped outta my chest, great work on this.
ThatTubaGuy03 t1_j6lzkm6 wrote
Reply to comment by IML_42 in [WP] You are the immortal ruler of a kingdom. Since the people didn't much care for an "immortal hell spawn" for a king, you play as the court jester. The king is merely your puppet. It was fine until a historian noticed how consistent the various kings laws have been over the last few centuries by halosos
Excellent! I love what you did with the prompt
ThatTubaGuy03 t1_j6lzitp wrote
Reply to comment by SilasCrane in [WP] You are the immortal ruler of a kingdom. Since the people didn't much care for an "immortal hell spawn" for a king, you play as the court jester. The king is merely your puppet. It was fine until a historian noticed how consistent the various kings laws have been over the last few centuries by halosos
Fantastic. I know you completed the prompt to perfection, and we can't ask for more, but if you have a bit of free time to tell us the fools story, I'd love to hear it.
MrRedoot55 t1_j6lzg3z wrote
GEAX t1_j6lzfz2 wrote
Reply to comment by Happy_Bagel in [WP] Out of all the superpowers out there, you consider yours the most sadistic; you can save any number of innocent people from death in the face of danger, but to gain that ability, you must kill an innocent person. Named after the infamous moral thought experiment, you are... Trolley Man. by MarauderOnReddit
The imagery... I have a feeling this story will stick with me for a long while
MrRedoot55 t1_j6lzcd8 wrote
Reply to comment by Rupertfroggington in [WP] A soul can reincarnate after they drink a bowl of magical soup to forget their past life. You've drank hundreds of bowls, but the memory is still as clear as day in your head. by Penna_23
Amazing work, as always. Though, I think the man watching his love's every turn is a little creepy... even then, I'm glad he isn't the obsessive type.
kazosk t1_j6lz26m wrote
Reply to comment by AutoModerator in [WP] Out of all the superpowers out there, you consider yours the most sadistic; you can save any number of innocent people from death in the face of danger, but to gain that ability, you must kill an innocent person. Named after the infamous moral thought experiment, you are... Trolley Man. by MarauderOnReddit
Go away Seihei-kun.
Aromatic-Wing4723 t1_j6lxoib wrote
Reply to [WP] Out of all the superpowers out there, you consider yours the most sadistic; you can save any number of innocent people from death in the face of danger, but to gain that ability, you must kill an innocent person. Named after the infamous moral thought experiment, you are... Trolley Man. by MarauderOnReddit
Rule one: I only take volunteers.
This is probably the most important rule.
I can’t coerce someone into doing it, either. Well, I could, but… I don’t think I could live with myself afterwards.
My power doesn’t allow me to kill, I have to do that on my own. So I’ve learned the best ways to do it. The most painless.
Guns can cause to much collateral damage, so I primarily use knives.
I think it’s better, that way. More personal. Makes it harder to view a life as worthless if you can look someone in the eyes as they die.
Rule two: Only use in disasters.
I could cure thousands of people of illnesses of all kinds. But if I do, medical knowledge will never progress. As much as it hurts, no matter how many sob stories I hear, I can’t do it. It with only cause more problems in the long run.
That’s why I never want my identity revealed. Not because of the killing. Killing isn’t easy. Not for me.
But the constant begging to save people when I know that it will only doom others in the long run.
I want to help. I do so badly.
And sometimes I do. Just for one or two people. Only for those that have no connection to me. Those that haven’t asked. Just to soothe my splintered soul.
And on I continue.
Another day, another crack added to the spreading litchenburg pattern across my heart.
Edit: typos
Spare_Personality591 t1_j6lxg0k wrote
Reply to comment by wandering_cirrus in [WP] You formed a contract with an adventurer that allows them to summon you in their time of need. You haven’t been summoned for years, almost forgetting about the contract until suddenly you’re summoned into the palace where your beloved adventurer is on his knees with a sword to his neck. by Blackrose_920
It's been such a long time since I last disappeared so deeply into a story. So lovely, thank you for sharing.
FatHeadedGoose t1_j6m6it8 wrote
Reply to comment by MarauderOnReddit in [WP] Out of all the superpowers out there, you consider yours the most sadistic; you can save any number of innocent people from death in the face of danger, but to gain that ability, you must kill an innocent person. Named after the infamous moral thought experiment, you are... Trolley Man. by MarauderOnReddit
link to it here