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Atreigas t1_je9oogc wrote

Don't worry, wanting to talk about your work is only natural, that desire is pretty overlapping with the desire to make and share it in the first place. Doesn't make you a narcissist.

I feel like the stone and tree stuff should probably be in the story itself, but yeah it's quite the leap from here to that epilogue.

I like the idea of his little shrine slowly building into an orphanage again. Lots of places this story could develop into. It's nice.

Stella and her divine dad patron. Love it.

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oliverjsn8 t1_je9o2i2 wrote

Great, at least We didn’t want Us to play some type of game before We’s attempt at escape. Already confusing enough without an Abbot and Costello bit. (Search ‘Who’s on First’. Into your choice of search engine.)

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freesias_are_my_fav t1_je9m0sa wrote

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GratedKnees t1_je9l1kw wrote

Ha, I love the voice of the demon. 'At first, we played tag. I won 50-0.' and 'we briefly dated. And by briefly I mean dated for 15 years.' made me chuckle!

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Basti0nman55 t1_je9ggc1 wrote

Tired.

So tired. We have no muscles which grow sore, no lungs to run out of breath. We skeletons exist for grunt work, anything exhausting, repetitive or anything someone doesn't want to do themselves.

I once served the man whom this hero is insistent on removing from this world. Some necromancer insisting on forcing his will on this place.

A man showed up one day, his struck down my brothers with ease venturing deeper into this stronghold.

Yet he spared me, once again alone, until he decided to let me join him. Claiming to be such a merciful hero for taking pity on this poor soul.

But its such an arrogant view, this so called hero is only such to himself. Is he doing anything different to the necromancer? Is he not forcibly inflicting his will on others killing my skeleton brothers when it was convenient for him yet claims to be some grand saviour of humanity.

Even he is no different, he spared me for no altruistic reasons but to use me as the one who ripped me from my sleep once did. I am expected to do any task he finds unbecoming of a hero, to be his mule carrying whatever little trinket takes his fancy then to put my second life on the line to protect his just to be expected to be thankful for it.

After all we skeletons minds rotted away centuries ago, surely we do not feel nor hold opinions on what has been forced on us?

With no mouth we can not say any of these meaningless thoughts anyway.

Yet when his time comes someone will surely want to use his strength as others have used mine. He will endure the same undead fate I have.

But I still would not wish this fate on anyone, not even my slavers, every action I grow more tired.

I hope I get to enjoy our shared eternal slumber again.

Feedback is welcome!

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5thhorseman_ t1_je9geql wrote

> But really this whole prompt seems built to make Dresden Files type responses.

Or Discworld style, as it's canon that its mages are deeply into theatrics and many spells can be carried out very simply - consider the Rite of Ask-Ente or Grandma Weatherwax's repertoire.

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KnightOfPurgatory t1_je9at3b wrote

Void Exile: WHERE'S MY SUPER SUIT.
Person: You are an eldritch being beyond mortal understanding. You don't have a super suit.
Void Exile: 5th dimensional grumbling.

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