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shelfdiscovery t1_j6jz30o wrote

I pictured Klara as being young-looking simply because her voice (at least in my head / based on how she is written) feels quite childlike, and it made the most sense for me to picture her resembling a child as well.

And by the end of the book, it's mentioned that Josie has to bend down to hug Klara, suggesting she is child-sized (especially since as a sickly child, Josie likely does not grow up to be that tall).

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Negative-Net-9455 t1_j6jys71 wrote

Overlong, particularly the opening act. Lazy stock King characters - The Grumpy Old Man, The Good Boy etc etc - truly awful prose on occasion. I mentioned this in a previous post on this book but when you commit a sentence like 'they darkened the darkening sky' to paper and think its good, you're in trouble.

He's showing his age too. Nothing wrong with that, he's older now, but why try and write a teenage character when you clearly can't write a teenager? It had 'how do you do fellow kids' energy running all through it.

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sailingg OP t1_j6jxs6l wrote

Reply to comment by Fun-Daikon-7185 in Carrie Soto Is Back by sailingg

I read Evelyn Hugo without knowing anything about it and having no expectations, and I think that was great because it's hard for works to live up to enormous hype.

I couldn't get into Malibu Rising for a while and then it really grabbed me. But I only really like Nina; the other Riva siblings are kind of meh to me. I think TJR thrives with first person perspective centering on one character.

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the-soaring-moa t1_j6jxp65 wrote

Reply to comment by manshamer in Can AI replace the authors? by [deleted]

You're talking about current AI which is in its extreme infancy. It will keep being developed and get better and better.

Some people are stuck on the idea/hope that AI is just going to fail and everyone will give up on it. That's not going to happen though.

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