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CasualfarmerBOC OP t1_je18ro7 wrote

I don't really have a standardized process.

I tend to think of a core personality trait, and then go and add things to it that may be kind of strange. Like the arrogant cat loving carving, or the lazy fish being good at math. As for side characters, most of them I try to just make them people. not exactly good or bad, but wanting to have a good life.

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Neuropain t1_je17lg0 wrote

Hey Causal, long time reader first time caller. Do you think it will be harder to keep the pacing as good as it has been now that the members of Fa Ram are splitting up and all have important missions? Before the splitting was, as I experienced it, more focused on one or two important things with some slice of life in between, but now we have Washy going of to get delicious food and two other almost as important missions.

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Cuxtercall t1_je17fjo wrote

I really like the "casual" style of the story and how it manage to keep it through so many chapters, especially considering so many novels just jump to the action at some point and don't recover that "casual" style and feel different from then on.

But now to the question: What was the feeling you want/wanted to convey to the readers while reading? Or let me rephrase it: What mood did you think readers would have reading your story? And considering your alias "Casualfarmer", in what kind of mood are you writing the story? And maybe even reading it?

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MicheleKO t1_je15xxm wrote

I’ve been reading for a few decades and have had that book hangover more than a few times. Dune series as a teenager, Night Circus, Pillars of the Earth and one that stuck with me for a long time after reading was Water for Elephants. Reading Jaws while laying on the beach or being scared of things that go bump in the night while reading Salems Lot. Or sitting in your backyard reading Dean Koontz book Watchers, as it takes place where you live. Nothing like a good book. Read on!

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dl107227 t1_je15m0u wrote

Pi Pa is the 2nd most powerful spirit beast on the FaRam. Am I wrong?

We know that individuals can gain Qi through eating food. This is how Bi De first gained Qi, along with Pi Pa and Chun Ki. We know that even a "vegetarian" can gain Qi from meat containing Qi because Miantao insists that Yin eat every bit of Qi laden food they come across. This gives her digestive issues while refining that Qi.

Pi Pa consumed Sun Ken and at least 2 other cultivators when the might of Fa Ram instructed the Whirling Demon Gang. She was still refining the Qi a week later when Jin gave her some of Meiling's stomach medicine. Now some may say that demonic Qi is not compatible for the cultivation of a member of Fa Ram but demonic Qi can be used. One of Shen Yu's complaints about being called away to the war was that the demons he was fighting were too weak to be refined into a pill.

So what I'm saying is that Pi Pa has consumed a lot of Qi. She rarely leaves the FaRam so is always eating Qi rich food and eating the cultivators was a whole lot more Qi. Wa Shi isn't really a spirit beast but could be argued that he is stronger than Pi Pa because you know... dragon. And perhaps Tigu on account of all the training she does could be rated 2nd. However, I am still convinced it is Pi Pa and we just haven't seen her unleash her full might.

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CasualfarmerBOC OP t1_je146mq wrote

I don't think I've managed to write myself into a corner quite yet, knock on wood. That probably will happen at some point, but luckily I've got a bunch of people helping me out to specifically avoid that.

As for a plot event I'd like to retcon? theres some stuff that happens in book 3 and 4 that I would like to handle a bit better, but thats mostly just changing when it happens in the story rather than how it happens. Which means that those sore spots get to be fixed on official release! One of the benefits of writing a web serial, I reckon.

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